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"She seems to never retire, always cheerful, helpful and lovable"
A smile would form on my face and my mind would rewind
There was a story I would love to tell the living world
Yesterday always bring priceless, beautiful memories
Of us when we first talked almost about everything
It is easy for me to tell everyone about her
A sentence long is more than enough
"She is no doubt the first female that inspire me big time"
And that is no lie even if it sounds cliche
Day to day she would give me endless spirits
Knew when I'm about to fall down and help me up
Whilst she has her own lovely family to take care about
The business of her as a mother, a wife, a friend, and a sister
But never once did she forget her job to write and just to listen
"She kept listening, reading and I always waited for her advices"
At night I wondered how tired she might be
How she goes on without complaining to everyone
Ranting only about true facts that it awakens people
I wonder... if she would realized this that I always wished
If only she was my mother or a big sister that I knew in this life
I would be a better person and that she will be my biggest impact
"She often read this but I love her so much, she won't know ever"

Mia - 4th July 2010 -
Honestly I have less female friends. I don't feel awkward towards that fact, it just seemed to happen to me since the first day I knew what friends are for. More males coming in rather than females. And what comes out as a result is that, whenever a female come to me and we became friends in no time, it would mean so much more to me. It'd be special to me, because I have less female friends, and I would love it to have more of them. That's why they're precious to me...

And this is actually for *Tanashai :aww:
I guess everything that you need to know about my feelings towards her are up there, yeah...? :aww:
I love her, and I don't think she realizes just how much :aww:

I've done this one since July :giggle: Unsure if it fits to get up.. :blush:
But here's for you!Thank you for everything, Mrs. Charlene :tighthug:

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Ebrethil Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's nice! Must be a great person :D
Aquitius Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011  Student Writer
No love for old Aquitius huh? ;)

Nah kidding love you and your poem <3
xinsomniakydx Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011  Student General Artist
You're not THAT old. One.
And I do LOVE you. Two.
Tanashai Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011  Professional Writer
You know, it's so funny; yesterday I was kind of depressed because EVERYONE comes to me but I can't go to anybody.

This really makes me feel better; it's nice to know that I'm making a difference and not just bashing my head against brick walls!

So thank you dear friend :huggle: I love you too :heart:
xinsomniakydx Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011  Student General Artist
You know... you can always can come to me, even though we're like thousands stones away and...millions seconds apart. But I'm always lost in the game. As you know.. :forgiveme:
I love you more :aww: :heart:
Tanashai Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011  Professional Writer
No I love you more!
xinsomniakydx Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011  Student General Artist
Me more!
Masanohashi Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011
very peaceful poem, it's so full of joy that it seems to fill the reader with it
totally nice piece, dearest Mia :huggle:
xinsomniakydx Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011  Student General Artist
:aww: Thank you so much my dear, i'm so glad you felt what i'm trying to send.. :hug:
Masanohashi Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011
youa re always welcome, Mia sweetheart :hug:
your poetry is always so beautiful ^^
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