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Trembling as the rain poured down
Heavy with it's lightning strike shone
Darkening the heaven's black crown
Storms that made the earth cut and torn

Midnight with stars and lonely moon
Time passed by and it's dawn soon
Red eyes unclosed inside the dim room
A soul in fear lied on the bed of doom

Mind racing as it thought of the disease
An illness that was going to be a crisis
Sucked  up the bloods away like leeches
Live or die it was just a matter of dices

Wired wrists, wounded heart and nose
Struggling to breath with the oxygen hose
Hot tears rolling away in the silences pose
Unspoken hopes and wishes now all are lost

Mia - 12th April 2011.
Fight for it.
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Ebrethil Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It sounds really good!
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daddysir Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011  Student General Artist
Of course it's cool. I'm glad to know that I'm not the only one that mixes rhyming schemes. When it works, it works and this works well.

Keep going, always fight. Always!
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Tanashai Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011  Professional Writer
FIGHT FOR IT! Get better soon sweetie :)
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